Friday, March 5, 2010

Glady's Aylward Biography (Part 2)

Here is the final draft:















I had Superkid go through and underline all of the misspelled words he knew of. Then, he corrected his capitalization & punctuation. After he looked up the misspelled words he rewrote the whole page in his best handwriting.

I did give him a few hints, telling him that there were more words misspelled, etc. Altogether though he pretty much edited the whole thing himself. There are a few things here and there that I'll have to point out to him still, but considering I haven't given him very much help at all - I think he did a great job for a 4th grader.

(Certainly much better than the first draft!)


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